Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Captain troy!

It all started in space with a bunch of alians wondering what it would be like tobe pirates. They landed some place on earth. they just thot it now but they might need camoflge for the ship they build in space so no one would notice them in the water. It would be kind of weird for a ship to be on the water with a bunch of alians waking around on the deck.





The alians start to read a book on how to bea pirat and how to steel from people for no reason what so ever. After they read the book they send a alian on to the island thats al around them. The alians have found a way for them selfs to transe form them selfs into people so no one would be all like AHHHH! WHAT IS THAT THING CALL THE COPS!. KILL IT!


That would just blow their whole plan over. In the book it says that you will know that your a pirates when you do something really stupid....like kid napping a poor little soul who cant protect himself from a full grown man because hes stuffing his face with candy..Well in this case a full grown alian dressed up in a pirates suit.





A few hours later the alian detects something on this cross walk type place.


'Hey you over their want a puppy or i mean candy do you like candy i think you do because your a child so you have to like candy?


'Okay' says the child exitingly.


As the child runs tward the trees the alian walks slowly tawords the fence that cuts you off from the water.


'Here you go now you injoi that candy while it lasts' says alian


The alian grabs the kids arm and swings his lantern three times so the other alians knows its him and he has a child with him. The ship fades into view so they can see it clearly. The child has no idea what is going on when hes stuffing his face with candy. As the alian ship gets to the shore they board the ship and kidnap the child who sttill has no idea whats going on yet because hes not finished the candy.



As they flu back to their home planet they had a party to congradulat that they are real pirats and that they did something bad for the first time of their life on that planet. When they got home they tryed to grab the kid but then realized that the kid couldn't breath in space so the alians throu him into space and hoped they wouldn't go to the slammer A.K.A prison. So they decided to go hid out in their new hidout.... their mom's house.

2 comments:

  1. god nice words i would give it a 3 by

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  2. A good story, a few spelling mistakes but overall I'd give you a 3.5/5 for ideas.

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