I would wonder why i am invisable because like you cant be invisable so how could it be possiable. Would it make me be like a super hero or just some rondom kid who just got lucky one day? Iv seen a few movies where an astroid falls from the sky and hits the earth then the person who finds it and touches it well yeh they get some sort of power wich would be super awsome if that could happen in reality. Sooo if I could turn invisable then i would be like invisable man and save the town or something like that and i could be like a bouncer or body gourd for all the presidents wich would be an incredable job.... well at least it would be better than being a doctor or a lawyer because your working for the govorment so you would probebly get way more money.
It would be scary because you would have to look out for terorests and people who would want to kill the presedent but i wouldn't have to worry because i would be invisable so they wouldn't se me so i could like go up behind them and karotay chop there neck and put them to sleep buuut i cant do that because i have no clue how to do that so i would need like professinal ninja traing to beat up the bad guys.
sooo yeh thats what i would do if i were invisable ... Have the best job in the world.
Good job staying on topic and finishing your ideas, but you started to go off topic a little with the ninja training.I would give this 4/5 and also it was a little hard to see the writing in red.
ReplyDeleteIt was pretty good to be honest, and the ideas were pretty good, but they were kind of scattered and they need to be all in the same place or stay on the same topic then switch to your next.
ReplyDeletesorry i forgot to write that it was 4/5
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